tastes and how it would taste even better if he had some saffron, which leads him into the old lady's kitchen. This little rat knows his spices (admiration). And as Remy interacts with humans throughout the film, we get a sense of his modesty and shyness about his talent, another admirable quality. With such a deep emotional core, how can one not root for this little rat to succeed? which Roddy, a pampered rat who lives with a rich family in Kensington, loves his life (who wouldn't?), seems cocky and has everything. When his owners are away on vacation, he spends a whole day playing with toys to Billy Idol's tune "Dancing With Myself," which re- inforces the fact that he's kind of lonely. This may be a bit too subtle in terms of pathos, but let's give it to him. In the humanity and ad- miration areas, however, we don't get any- thing from the story. Even when Sid, the uninvited guest from the sewers shows up, Roddy is unwelcoming, trying selfishly to send him back to the sewers instead of sharing his toys. We're supposed to feel sorry for Roddy when he is flushed down the toilet into sewer city. His motivation to return home is certainly worthy and resonates universally, but because we don't have an emotional con- nection to Roddy, we just don't care about the rest of the film, despite all the interesting ad- ventures and oftentimes funny humor. vive in the big city. We also admire his desire to cook once he reaches Gusteau's restaurant and his willingness to help Linguini keep his job and save his restaurant. All are worthy mo- tivations that create high stakes, especially as Remy tries to remain hidden from the hu- mans, his survival being the highest stake there is. This is rich storytelling. Contrast this depth with the contrived and insincere story- telling in Flushed Away, whose journey back home is about pop culture references, visual gags and ethnic humor -- though Roddy's main motivation to return home is definitely worthy and universally resonant. We can even relate to his budding romance with Rita. But the problem is that we just don't care about Roddy due to a very low empathy level. This flat emotional core certainly correlates with Flushed Away's poor box office performance and mixed reviews. Compare Ratatouille's worldwide box office of $623 million and a Metascore of 96 with Flushed Away's $178 mil- lion and Metascore of 74. films against each other, again featuring sim- ilar characters -- this time penguins. How can we not care about penguins? Let's look at the Australian independent film, Happy Feet, which won the Oscar for Best Animated Fea- ture in 2007, had a Metascore of 83 and was a box office success, earning $384 million worldwide. Let's compare it with a similar film, Surf's Up from Sony, which was a box of- fice disappointment, with $149 million worldwide and a Metascore of 63. but also is unable to sing, a crucial need for of a tap dancer when he's happy (admiration), but because "it ain't penguin," this immedi- ately makes him an outcast in his community (pathos again). This is done in a few different ways: His parents think there's something wrong with him; he makes a fool of himself when he tries to sing in school, with his teacher telling him that if he can't sing, he's not a penguin. for a complete emotional core? You bet. As a teenager, Mumble bonds with his friend Glo- ria when he offers her a fish he caught and fights hungry birds over it just to give it to her. Adding to the emotional stakes is his motiva- tion to survive predators after he accidentally separates from his community and tries to be accepted by another community of penguins. And when he tries to find out who the aliens the fish scarcity, his motives are unselfish and worthy. just as cute as the penguins in Happy Feet, so what did the filmmakers do wrong? You got it -- an incomplete emotional core. Through a mockumentary style, we're introduced to Cody, a rockhopper penguin who's the best surfer around (admiration), but that's about it. There's no pathos, nor any humanity. Our entire introduction to him is mostly exposi- tional through various interviews with his mother and bickering brother. As to his moti- vation, all he wants to do is leave home and about. And then when he makes it to Pen Gu Island for a surfing competition, it goes down- hill as we discover that our main character is pretty much goal-less, beyond his desire to win the competition. But because his emo- tional need to win it is missing, the stakes feel low. Low empathy combined with low emo- tional stakes is a recipe for disaster, proven re- peatedly by the data. miss the fact that it's not the technology but the studio's writing that makes the difference, especially its focus on the emotional core. This leads to quality storytelling with heart and hu- manity. While Pixar did not invent this emo- tional core formula, it has been consistent in applying it. Those who have used it have proven to be successful; those who have ig- nored it, not so much. |