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First page, or as near to there as possible,
introduce the hero and swat him with a fist-
ful of trouble. Hint at a mystery, a menace or
a problem to be solved -- something the
hero has to cope with later.
The hero pitches in to cope with his fist-
ful of trouble. (He tries to fathom the mys-
tery, defeat the menace or solve the
problem.)
Introduce all the other characters as soon
as possible. Bring them in on the action.
Hero's endeavors should land him in a
physical conflict near the end of
the first act.
Also near the end of first act,
add a surprise twist to the plot's
development.
From there on out, shovel
more grief on the hero. Put up
obstacles to his or her success. A
lover, child or friend is in danger.
Or the hero must overcome skep-
tics, or outwit or outrun govern-
ment agents who would try to
stop him, all the while struggling
with inner demons borne from
all those years of ridicule when
no one would listen to him.
In Dent's words, "Shovel the grief onto
the hero. Hero makes some headway and
corners the villain in a physical conflict.
There can even be another plot twist that
sends the story in another direction that in-
tensifies the problem. For example, the nu-
clear bomb meant to stop the creature only
made it mad -- and bigger and badder.
Act three in the Lester Dent pulp model
consists of:
Shovel the difficulties more thickly upon
the hero.
Get the hero almost buried in his trou-
bles. (Figuratively, the villain should have
him prisoner and framed for a murder rap;
the girl is presumably dead, everything is lost
and the different murder method is about to
dispose of the suffering protagonist.)
The hero extricates himself using his
skills, training or brawn.
The remaining mysteries -- save one big
one until to this point to help grip interest --
are cleared up in course of final conflict as the
hero takes the situation in his own hands.
Final twist, reveal a big surprise. This
can be the villain turning out to be the
unexpected person, having the sought-
after "treasure" be worthless, the crea-
ture be a product of man's own genetic
tampering, etc.
Add the snapper -- the punch line
-- to end it. Some variation on "hasta
la vista, baby" should do.
You can increase your chances of
success with your pulp movie if you put
the words "mega" or "dino" somewhere
in the title. Megaquake, Megafault,
Dinocroc and Dinoshark are good exam-
ples. Combine them to create a "mega-
dinosaur" and you're on your way.
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(818) 308-8858
Credits: The Fallen, Weiner Dog Nationals, Samurai Avenger: The
Blind Wolf
Genres: All
Note: Send submissions with a filled-out submissions form to
submissions@camelotfilms.com.
Capital Arts Entertainment
Lisa Gooding, Development
17941 Ventura Blvd., Suite 205
Encino, CA 91316
(818) 343-8950
Credits: Casper: A Spirited Beginning, Men in White, Timecop 2
Description: Started by Mike Elliott and Rob Kerchner, two for-
mer producers for Roger Corman, Capital Arts specializes in di-
rect-to-DVD features and sequels to first-run theatrical releases.
Genres: All
Notes: Query Lisa Gooding at info@capitalarts.com.
New Horizons Pictures
Roger Corman, president and CEO
11600 San Vicente Blvd.
Los Angeles, CA 90049
(310) 820-6733
Credits: Dinoshark, Dinocroc, Supergator, Spacejacked
Description: Known as the "B Movie King," producer Roger
Corman has discovered a who's who of writers, actors and direc-
tors over his lengthy career.
Genre: Drama, fantasy, sci-fi and horror
Notes: Send a query letter via snail mail to Roger Corman.
Red 5 Entertainment
Clint Hutchison, writer-producer-director
5524 Colbath Ave.
Sherman Oaks, CA 91401
(310) 980-8626
Credits: The Way Home, Terror Tract, Conjurer
Genre: All
Notes: Email queries to Clint Hutchison at
clintonhutchison@gmail.com.
Troma Entertainment
Lloyd Kaufman
36-40 11th St.
Long Island City, NY 11106
(310) 410-9405
Credits: Poultrygeist: Night of the Chicken Dead, Toxic Avenger (series)
Genre: Comedy, horror
Notes: Troma's website offers information on how to submit a
script or completed film. Visit: www.troma.com/jobs/.
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