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creativescreenwriting January/February 2011
NEARLY 58 YEARS
after the Emancipation
Proclamation freed black slaves from the
tyranny of their white masters, in Duluth,
Minnesota -- about as far north as you
could get in the Union at the time -- on a
dismal, drizzly June morning in 1920, the
John Robinson Circus rolled into town.
And what should have been a festive sum-
mer reprieve for the hard-working, blue-
collar town exploded into a powder keg of
prejudice, hatred and intoler-
ance instead, culminating in a
horrific event that would scar
this seemingly progressive city
for decades.
Three African-American cir-
cus workers were attacked and
lynched by a mob after unsub-
stantiated rumors spread that
six African-Americans had
raped a teenage girl. No evi-
dence of the crime was found
and the murders made na-
tional headlines.
This painful chapter of
American history unfolds in
grim, no-uncertain detail in
ALAMO-DULUTH: Anatomy of a Lynching,
written by 2010 Expo Grand Prize winner
Dale Botten. The entry into the contest,
like the screenplay itself, appears to have
come about through what the screenwriter
calls "divine providence."
Botten entered his script into the Austin
Film Festival competition, where he had
been a quarterfinalist before. He had
planned to spend part of his October at the
festival in Texas, "But that's when one or
more of the aforementioned mystical forces
stepped in," he says. "Something gnawing
in my gut told me that Austin would not
be a good choice... at least, not this time.
This feeling plagued me for several weeks
and I began considering other festivals."
Botten decided to skip Austin and attend
the 2010 Screenwriting Expo (run by Cre-
ative Screenwriting
) instead, which is also
held in October in Los Angeles.
Before entering the Expo's competition,
he made some important changes to the
material he had submitted to other con-
tests. "I perused my script again," he ex-
plains. "Something was not right. The
opening scene did not portend the power
of the script inside. I reasoned that, since it
was based on a true incident, the eventual
outcome was no surprise." This led to Bot-
ten cutting the original opening and re-
placing it with a more powerful one that
was previously at the end of the film. "So
the script I entered at the Expo was differ-
ent than the Austin version," he continues.
Similarly, the genesis of the screenplay
also came from chance. "As a writer, I am
always on the lookout for a good story,"
Botten says. "Good stories spark a writer's
imagination and get his or her wheels turn-
ing." A friend of his wanted him to read
Michael Fedo's "The Lynching in Duluth"
and Botten was floored. "When I first read
Michael's excellent book, I got excited --
even giddy," he continues. "Here was a
tragic but amazing story that I simply could
not ignore. As I got deeper into the project,
the telling of the story consumed me. I
needed to tell this tragic story in a pro-
found way that would convey the horror
and the pathos. I had no time for other
considerations, only that it was a story I
had to tell as well as I could."
Around this time, Botten's wife was ad-
mitted to a Duluth hospital, near the place
where the men were murdered and a me-
morial had been set up. As he
drove past this spot every day
on his way to the hospital, he
gained deeper insight into
what his script was really
about. "That's when I realized
that the story I was so focused
on was not about three
bronze statues," he says. "It
was about three real flesh-
and-blood innocent human
beings, who were murdered in
cold blood, not only by a mob
but by a whole society -- a so-
ciety that allowed intolerance
and hate to slime their way in
to control what normally
would be peaceful, tolerant people, using
the guise of justice."
Botten used what he felt was an oppor-
tunity to write something great, and it paid
off: He is the Grand Prize winner of the
2010 Screenwriting Expo Screenplay Com-
petition, a title that comes with $20,000
cash and exposure to producers and reps in
Hollywood. Botten's says his experience
with the Expo has been worthwhile. "Had I
not won the Grand Prize, I would still have
considered my experience at the Expo valu-
able," he says. "I have had some read re-
quests and have been able to network with
some new and very good industry people."
Let us hope. And, perhaps, Providence
will again look favorably upon Dale Bot-
ten. We should all be as lucky.
Dale Botten
BREAKING
IN
BY JOHN FOLSOM
]
2010 Screenwriting Expo Screenplay
Contest Winner: Dale Botten
ALAMO-DULUTH: Anatomy of a Lynching